Having completed step one, you
should now have a rough idea of the
elements you wish to include in your
scholarship essay, including your
goals, important life experiences,
research experience, diversifying
features, spectacular nonacademic
accomplishments, financial need,
etc. You should also now have an
idea of what impression you want to
make on the scholarship committee.
You must now consider topics that
will allow you to synthesize your
important personal characteristics
and experiences into a coherent
whole. While most scholarship essays
allow great latitude in topic
selection, you must also be sure to
answer the questions that were asked
of you. Leaving a lasting impression
on someone who reads 50 essays a day
will not be easy, but we have
compiled some guidelines to help you
get started.
Consider the following questions
before proceeding:
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Have you selected a topic
that describes something of
personal importance in your
life, with which you can use
vivid personal
experiences as
supporting details?
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Is your topic a gimmick?
That is, do you plan to
write your essay in iambic
pentameter or make it funny.
You should be very, very
careful if you are planning
to do this. We recommend
strongly that you do not do
this. Almost always, this is
done poorly and is not
appreciated by the
scholarship committee unless
a creative approach is
explicitly recommended.
Nothing is worse than not
laughing or not being amused
at something that was
written to be funny or
amusing.
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Will your topic only repeat
information listed elsewhere
on your application? If so,
pick a new topic.
Don’t mention GPAs or
standardized test scores in
your essay if they
are mentioned elsewhere.
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Can you offer vivid
supporting paragraphs to
your essay topic? If you
cannot easily think of
supporting paragraphs with
concrete examples, you
should probably choose a
different essay topic.
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Can you fully answer
the question asked
of you? Can you address and
elaborate on all points
within the specified word
limit? If you plan on
writing about something
technical, make sure you
truly can back up your
interest in a topic and are
not merely throwing around
big scientific words. Unless
you convince the reader that
you actually have the life
experiences to back up your
interest in neurobiology,
the reader will assume you
are trying to impress
him/her with shallow
tactics. Also, be sure you
can write to the scholarship
officers and that you are
not writing over their
heads.
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Can you keep the
reader's interest
from the first word. The
entire essay must be
interesting, considering
scholarship officers will
probably only spend a few
minutes reading each essay.
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Is your topic overdone? To
ascertain this, peruse
through old essays.
EssayEdge's 100 free
application essays can help
you do this. However, most
topics are overdone, and
this is not a bad thing. A
unique or convincing answer
to a classic topic can pay
off big.
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Will your topic turnoff a
large number of people? If
you write on how everyone
should worship your God, how
wrong or right abortion is,
or how you think the
Republican or Democratic
Party is evil, you will not
win the scholarship or aid
award. The only thing worse
than not writing a memorable
essay is writing an essay
that will be remembered
negatively. Stay away from
specific religions,
political doctrines, or
controversial opinions. You
can still write an essay
about Nietzsche's influence
on your life, but express
understanding that not all
intelligent people will
agree with Nietzsche's
claims. Emphasize instead
Nietzsche's influence on
your life, and not why
you think he was wrong or
right in his claims.
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In this vein, if you are
presenting a topic that is
controversial, you must
acknowledge counter
arguments without sounding
arrogant.
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Will a scholarship officer
remember your topic
after a day of reading
hundreds of essays? What
will the officer remember
about your topic? What will
the officer remember about
you? What will your lasting
impression be?
After evaluating your essay
topics with the above criteria and
asking for the free opinions of
EssayEdge editors, of your teachers
or colleagues, and of your friends,
you should have at least 1-2
interesting essay topics. Consider
the following guidelines below.
1. Accentuate the Positive
If you are planning on writing
an essay on how you survived poverty
in Russia, your mother's suicide,
your father's kidnapping, or your
immigration to America from Asia,
you should be careful that your main
goal is to address your own personal
qualities. Just because something
sad or horrible has happened to you
does not mean that you should win a
scholarship. You don't want to be
remembered as the pathetic
applicant. You want to be remembered
as the applicant who showed
impressive qualities under difficult
circumstances. It is for this reason
that essays relating to this topic
are considered among the best.
Unless you only use the horrible
experience as a lens with which to
magnify your own personal
characteristics, you will not write
a good essay.
2. Accentuate the Unique
"Diversity" is the biggest
buzzword of the 1990's. For this
reason, so many applicants are
tempted to declare what makes them
diverse. However, simply saying you
are a black, lesbian female will not
impress scholarship officers in the
least. While an essay incorporating
this information would probably be
your best topic idea, you must
finesse the issue by addressing your
own personal qualities and how you
overcame stigma, dealt with social
ostracism, etc. If you are a rich
student from Beverly Hills whose
father is an engineer and whose
mother is a lawyer, but you happen
to be a minority, an essay about how
you dealt with adversity would be
unwise. You must demonstrate vividly
your personal qualities, interests,
motivations, etc. Address
specifically how your diversity will
contribute to the realm of campus
opinion, the academic environment,
and the larger society.
3. Accentuate the Strengths
Don't mention weaknesses unless
you absolutely need to explain them
away. You want to make a positive
first impression, and telling a
scholarship officer anything about
drinking, drugs, partying, etc.
undermines your goal. EssayEdge
editors have read more essays on ADD
(Attention Deficit Disorder) than we
would ever have imagined. Why admit
to weakness when you can instead
showcase your strengths?
4. Accentuate Yourself
Be honest, but not for honesty's
sake. Unless you are a truly
excellent writer, your best, most
passionate writing will be about
events that actually occurred. While
you might be tempted to invent
hardship, it is completely
unnecessary. Write an essay about
your life that demonstrates your
personality.