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Scholarship Essay
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CRABIEL SCHOLARSHIP WINNER - won $3,000
scholarship
Like Mr. Crabiel, I literally work tirelessly in
many academic and leadership roles. I sleep no
more than six hours a night because of my desire
to expertly meet my many commitments. Throughout
my life, I have worked as long and as hard as I
possibly can to effect beneficial changes in
both school and society.
During the summer of tenth grade, I took a
number theory course at Johns Hopkins University
with students from Alaska, California, and
Bogota, Colombia. Similarly, during the summer
following eleventh grade, I was one of ninety
students from New Jersey selected to attend the
Governor's School in the Sciences at Drew
University. At Drew, I took courses in molecular
orbital theory, special relativity, cognitive
psychology, and I participated in an
astrophysics research project. For my
independent research project, I used a telescope
to find the angular velocity of Pluto. With the
angular velocity determined, I used Einstein's
field equations and Kepler's laws to place an
upper bound on the magnitude of the cosmological
constant, which describes the curvature of space
and the rate of the universe's expansion.
In
addition to learning science, I recently
lectured physics classes on special relativity
at the request of my physics teacher. After
lecturing one class for 45 minutes, one student
bought many books on both general and special
relativity to read during his study hall.
Inspiring other students to search for knowledge
kindles my own quest to understand the world and
the people around me.
As
president of the National Honor Society, I tutor
students with difficulties in various subject
areas. In addition, I am ranked number one in my
class with an SAT score of 1580 and SATII scores
of 750 in math, 760 in writing, and 800 in
physics. In school, I take the hardest possible
courses including every AP course offered at the
high school. I am the leading member of the Math
Team, the Academic Team, and the Model Congress
Team. In the area of leadership, I have recently
received the Rotary Youth Leadership Award from
a local rotary club, have been asked to attend
the National Youth Leadership Forum on Law and
the Constitution in Washington D.C., and wrote
the winning essay on patriotism for South
Plainfield's VFW chapter. Currently enrolled in
Spanish 6,I am a member of both the Spanish Club
and the Spanish Honor Society. In addition, I
recently was named a National Merit Scholar.
Besides involvement in academic and leadership
positions, I am active in athletics. For
instance, I lift weights regularly. In addition,
I am the captain of my school's varsity tennis
team. So far this year, my individual record on
the team is 3-0.
Working vigorously upon being elected Student
Council President, I have begun a biweekly
publication of student council activities and
opinions. Also, the executive board under my
direction has opened the school store for the
first time in nearly a decade. With paint and
wood, we turned a janitor's closet into a
fantastic store. I also direct many fund raisers
and charity drives. For instance, I recently
organized a charity drive that netted about
$1,500 for the family of Alicia Lehman, a local
girl who received a heart transplant.
As
Student Liaison to the South Plainfield Board of
Education, I am working to introduce more
advanced-placement courses, more reading of
philosophy, and more math and science electives
into the curriculum. At curriculum committee
meetings, I have been effective in making Board
members aware of the need for these courses. In
addition, my speeches at public Board meetings
often draw widespread support, which further
helps to advance my plans for enhancing the
curriculum.
I
have also been effective as a Sunday school
teacher. By helping elementary school students
formulate principles and morals, I make a
difference in their lives every week. The value
system that I hope to instill in them will last
them their entire lives. I find teaching
first-graders about Christ extremely rewarding.
Clearly, I have devoted my life both to working
to better myself and to improving civilization
as a whole. Throughout the rest of my life, I
hope to continue in this same manner of
unselfish work. Just as freeholder Crabiel
dedicates his life to public service, I commit
my life to helping others and to advancing
society's level of understanding.
Scholarship
Essay Two
WINNING NATIONAL MERIT SCHOLAR ESSAY
Nothing in all the world is comparable to
reading Ayn Rand beneath New York's skyline or
to studying Nietzsche atop a mountain summit.
Since childhood, the studies of philosophy and
science have interested me profoundly. Having
read many books on relativity, quantum
mechanics, existentialism, religion, capitalism,
democracy and post-Aristotelian philosophy, my
quest for knowledge has only intensified.
Certainly, the purpose of my life is to discover
a greater understanding of the universe and its
people. Specifically, I plan to better grasp the
interrelationship among forces, matter, space,
and time. In addition, I hope to find a unified
field theory and a convincing explanation for
the birth of the universe.
During the summer of tenth grade, I took a
number theory course at Johns Hopkins University
with students from Alaska, California, and
Bogota, Colombia. My attendance of the New
Jersey Governor's School in the Sciences is
another accomplishment that exemplifies my
dedication to knowledge. During the summer
following eleventh grade, I took courses in
molecular orbital theory, special relativity,
cognitive psychology, and I participated in an
astrophysics research project. For my
independent research project, I used a telescope
to find the angular velocity of Pluto. With the
angular velocity determined, I used Einstein's
field equations and Kepler's laws to place an
upper bound on the magnitude of the cosmological
constant, which describes the curvature of space
and the rate of the universe's expansion.
In addition to learning science, I recently
lectured physics classes on special relativity
at the request of my physics teacher. After
lecturing one class for 45 minutes, one student
bought many books on both general and special
relativity to read during his study hall.
Inspiring other students to search for knowledge
kindles my own quest to understand the world and
the people around me.
Also, as president of the National Honor
Society, I tutor students with difficulties in
various subject areas. Moreover, I am ranked
number one in my class, and I am the leading
member of the Math Team, the Academic Team, and
the Model Congress Team. In the area of
leadership, I have recently received the Rotary
Youth Leadership Award from a local rotary club
and have been asked to attend the National Youth
Leadership Forum on Law and the Constitution in
Washington D.C. Currently enrolled in Spanish
6,I am a member of both the Spanish Club and the
Spanish Honor Society.
As student council president, I have begun a
biweekly publication of student council
activities and opinions. Also, the executive
board under my direction has opened the school
store for the first time in nearly a decade and
is finding speakers to speak at a series of
colloquia on topics ranging from physics to
politics. Directing fund raisers and charity
drives also consumes much of my time. For
instance, I recently organized a charity drive
that netted about $1,500 for the family of a
local girl in need of a heart transplant.
Consistent with my love of freedom and my belief
in democracy, which is best summarized by
Hayek's Road to Serfdom, I have recently
initiated an application to become the liaison
to the local board of education. Also, in
keeping with my belief that individuals develop
strong principles and ideology, I teach Sunday
school three months a year and have chaperoned
for a local Christian school.
Outside pure academics and leadership roles, I
lift weights five times a week for an hour each
day. In addition, I play singles for my school's
varsity tennis team. Because I find
extraordinary satisfaction in nature and have
dedicated my life to its understanding, I enjoy
mountain climbing. Among the notable peaks I
have reached are Mt. Washington, Mt Jefferson,
Mt. Madison, Mt. Marcy and Mt. Katahdin.
Unquestionably, my life's aim is to dramatically
raise the height of the mountain of knowledge so
that my successors may have a more accurate view
of the universe around them. |
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